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The moment a man sets his thoughts down on paper, however secretly, he is in a sense writing for an audience, even if that audience is only his future self; and the future self may prove a harsher critic than any contemporary.

— George Orwell, Why I Write (1946)
3d ago

The best children's books are works of philosophy in disguise, shining a sidewise gleam on the fundamental questions we live with, articulating in the language of children, which is the language of great simplicity and great profundity, the most complex truths about being human.

1w ago

A book must be the axe for the frozen sea within us. That is my belief.

1w ago

Listening feels a little like watching a river move through a cluster of rocks, breaking apart for a moment and then merging. But the rendition that really gets me, that I keep playing again and again, is a slowed version of Landis' original—about 32 minutes, or five times the initial length. To go back to that river, it's like the water is half-frozen now, moving between the chutes of rock with the speed of a slurry.

1w ago

The great enemy of clear language is insincerity. When there is a gap between one's real and one's declared aims, one turns as it were instinctively to long words and exhausted idioms, like a cuttlefish squirting out ink.

4w ago

Talent is insignificant. I know a lot of talented ruins. Beyond talent lie all the usual words: discipline, love, luck, but most of all, endurance.

4w ago

The moment a man sets his thoughts down in writing, however secretly, he is in a sense making a bid for immortality — selling himself to posterity — and posterity, which has the last word, may not be buying.

1mo ago

The function of the imagination is not to make strange things settled, so much as to make settled things strange.

1mo ago

The most valuable of all talents is that of never using two words when one will do. And the most dangerous of all follies is to mistake the map for the territory.

1mo ago
stratechery.com
Write Things Down

Biological evolution is the slowest and most permanent form of learning, but it takes millennia; oral communication is like a context window, effective but lossy; actually writing things down is what made learning extendable and scalable.

1mo ago

Self-improvement loops learn from the difference between what the AI drafted and what the person actually sent. Daniel built a weekly skill that compares Claude's original drafts with his final versions, then uses those differences to improve future work. It resembles Alex Lieberman's 'write like me' loop, but it relies less on explicit feedback. Instead, it observes Daniel's actual behavior and learns from the small edits he makes instinctively.

2mo ago

The moment a man sets his thoughts down on paper, however secretly, he is in a sense writing for an audience; and the more candidly he writes, the more intimately he is addressing his reader.

2mo ago
whyisthisinteresting
The AI and Writing Edition

The other problem, I think, is that good writing is fundamentally anti-consensus. For writing to be above average, it shouldn't sound like everything else. My daughter might get a fine grade aping the teacher's example essay, but the road to good, or even great, is doing it your own way.

2mo ago

Give your readers as much information as possible as soon as possible. To hell with suspense. Readers should have such complete understanding of what is going on, where and why, that they could finish the story themselves, should cockroaches eat the last few pages.

2mo ago

It is a very hard undertaking to seek to please everybody; and I think it wiser to content a few, and let the multitude go whistle for what they get from me.

3mo ago

The moment a man begins to talk about technique, that's proof that he is fresh out of ideas.

3mo ago

We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master. The moment you think you have mastered something, you have merely learned enough to see how far you have yet to go.

3mo ago

The multitude of books is a great evil. There is no measure of limit to this fever for writing; every one must be an author; some out of vanity, to acquire celebrity and raise up a name, others for the sake of lucre and gain.

3mo ago

We are always afraid to start something that we want to make very good, true, and serious. We believe in our hearts that it will come to nothing — that it is hopeless. But it is not hopeless. It can be done.

4mo ago

Interlocutors can help draw out what matters most to us (in a particular project, or in our overall practice). Mission statements make our ambitions legible to ourselves and to the external world. But writing one can feel lonely and uncertain, like fumbling through the dark recesses of our psyches.

4mo ago

"Dear Mr. Benjamin Franklin," wrote a seventh grader from Winterville, Georgia. "In your time, the United States hardly existed. As I am writing this letter, it is almost the semi quincentennial, and BOY does the US exist now!"

4mo ago

Machiavelli could have left exile and worked for any number of different principalities that would have been eager to make use of his talents. Instead, he decided to rot in the countryside and compile his career's lessons about power, politics, and human nature into a book he dedicated to the very man whose new regime had tortured and exiled him, Lorenzo di Piero de' Medici.

4mo ago
longreads.com
The End of Books

Paging through nearly three thousand library books, I saw her talk back to them, disagree with them, question and antagonize and struggle with them. In one, she penciled the word succotash —the nineteenth-century equivalent of nonsense ; on the fly of another, inscribed to her lover William Morton Fullerton, she composed a four-stanza poem that does not exist anywhere else in her own hand.

4mo ago

The demand that I make of my reader is that he should devote his whole life to reading my works. But this is hardly ever the case; he usually also has a job, a family, and other amusements. This is obviously a sign of insufficient seriousness.

5mo ago

The moment a man sets his thoughts down on paper, however secretly, he is in a sense writing for an audience, and the fact of his not expecting any particular reader does not prevent him from having a vague composite picture in his mind of the sort of people who will eventually read him.

5mo ago

It can't have feelings. It doesn't have taste, instinct or chemistry. Those things remain profoundly human, and they're essential to good writing. But AI is brilliant at structure and organisation.

5mo ago

Even if you think you have no interest in those topics, it's hard not to be drawn in by Em's super smart writing and analysis, which regularly broadens out to examine wider cultural and societal issues.

5mo ago
whyisthisinteresting
The Creative Parent Edition

Unlike my children, my books are cruelly unforgiving of my weaknesses, failings, and flaws of character. Most of all, my books, unlike my children, do not love me back.

5mo ago

Judges check page length before reading a word. • Long brief? We read faster and with less attention. • Short brief? We slow down and pay closer attention. Brevity signals confidence.

5mo ago

The English language hates the slightest whiff of dishonesty, even levels so small you wouldn't naturally notice them yourself. It punishes you by making your writing worse.

6mo ago

When you start writing directly for readers, without intermediaries, that begins to happen naturally. Above all, I decide to treat the reader as a trusted friend—with the hope that you might extend the same courtesy to me.

6mo ago

She wants to identify how he chooses and places words with the intention of producing material effects on the reader's body. How, exactly, does he make hearts beat faster, stomachs lurch and palms prickle with sweat?

6mo ago

These older books have a sense of integrity. This project was just an opportunity for me to go back to some of my favorite books and look at the ways that's true.

7mo ago

I want to feel what it feels like to make that song go. I think that's taught me to recognize when a song of my own feels right. The same excitement I feel about someone else's song, the desire to be moved, is intact when I'm trying to write my own.

8mo ago

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